Chapter Three – A Retrospective

Morning everybody! Sort of. I’ve actually been up since 7, but it takes time to prepare myself to address my hordes of adoring fans. So Chapter Three sees our first unequivocal hero, David. Does he seem like a realistic teenager? How about the chapter itself? When I’m trying to strike a darker note, does it work? Does it seem hurried at all?

Also, I’ve been thinking some about cover design – I have two ideas:

1. An old-timey looking chart of the solar system, with “Here There Be Dragons” style monsters in the corners.

2. Some sort of stylized, art-decoish image evoking the colonial era in America. Maybe a flag in the earth?

I think I like the first one more – any thoughts on these two, or other suggestions?


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