Saturday Morning Feedback

Good morning everybody!

Welcome to the very first Saturday morning feedback and compliment fishing post. I’ll be dropping these posts on the weekend to lay out a brief description of what I’m concerned about in the week’s chapter. I do have some concerns about the first chapter I can’t really get into for plot reasons, so I’ll have to address them later. For now, I’m content to just have launched, so I won’t get too in-depth about what I feel are the chapters’ weaknesses – but that doesn’t mean that you shouldn’t. Let me know what you think in the comments, or shoot me an e-mail at hawknewsnetwork@gmail.com.

Besides editorial stuff, I wanted to make some suggestions for reading this thing. Basically, I hate how this blog looks. When you click on a chapter, you just get a massive wall of text that seems to go on forever, but if you copy-paste it into Word, it’s only about seven pages. I can’t stand to read anything of any length on this site. I’ll probably be scouting for better places to host this, or maybe just learn to use WordPress better. In any case, one thing I definitely want to do is attach the chapters to each page in a Word document, as soon as I figure out how.

One thing I’m worried about – what do you think of Columbus? Scary? Cheesy? Does he sound like an alien, or does he sound like a guy in an alien costume?

That’s it! Thanks for helping out, seriously, even if all you do is read it. And remember to like the Facebook page, if you haven’t yet!

Reuben

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